The Father of the Son quest, map coordinates 1443:1239, in the text bubble on reaching this quest location, in the first line "managed" should be "manage" - "... How did you manage to kill the guards? ...".
"Doing nothing with purpose!" ... Rhodes, 2012
http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15457
In Lamen, map coordinates 1621:975, NPC text bubble second line "
you're" should be changed to "
you were" -" ...I thought
you were a ...".
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"Doing nothing with purpose!" ... Rhodes, 2012
http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15458
The Spark Rock (Timed) quest in Lamen, map coordinates 1589:1057. In the Start Quest screen, third paragraph, first line, it currently reads "Would you collect them for me.... and bring to me...". Currently, there is a word missing from the second part of the sentence and so I think this would be better changed to - "Would you collect and bring them to me...", or "Would you collect them and bring them to me...".
"Doing nothing with purpose!" ... Rhodes, 2012
http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15459
The Artifact Collector (Collection) on the carpet in Ashra. The Start Quest screen, first line of the fourth paragraph, fourth word "take" should be "bring" - "When your adventures bring you back to me ....". This is in addition to the error in the first paragraph previously reported - the missing "you" in the last sentence of the first paragraph.
"Doing nothing with purpose!" ... Rhodes, 2012
http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15461
Precious Crystals (Collection) on the carpet in Ashra. In the Start Quest screen, first sentence second line "bath" would really be better as "bathe" - "I could just bathe, sink, drown ....".
"Doing nothing with purpose!" ... Rhodes, 2012
http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15464
NPC As'Arrath Guard, map coordinates 1566:956, in the last line "
happen" should be "
happened" - "...what
happened to them.".
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http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15466
NPC in Lower Ashra, map coordinates 1569:936, the first word of the third line "
used" should be "
use" - "...They didn't
use to be so ...".
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http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15470
NPC on the carpet in Ashra. in the last sentence "
the" is missing before "way" - "...That is
the way to go...".
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http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15472
The NPC lion handler next to the Ennahar Arena, map coordinates 1543:1174, last two words "comes back" may read better as "will come back".
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http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15503
NPC in The Damned Grounds, map coordinates 1174:466, perhaps if "us" is inserted after 'threatening' the sentence will make a little more sense, though what they are threatening them with would be even better.
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http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15518
NPC by the start of the secret path through the forest in Sunthief Gorge. In the second line "
if" should be "
of" - "...in the dense part
of the forest."
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http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15525
NPC by the camp in Sunthief Gorge. I believe the first sentence should be in the present tense not the past - "I wish Shaul and Kavilan were still alive. ...".
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http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15526
Frozen Snakes (Group) quest in The Serpent Spire. In the Start Quest Screen, fifth paragraph, first line, eleventh word "the", would be better removed, the sentence will then read - "... I need you to go into the Spire and restart Master Kempelen’s frost mechanism by hand.... ".
"Doing nothing with purpose!" ... Rhodes, 2012
http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15529
Serpent Intellect (Group) quest in The Serpent Spire. In the Start Quest screen, third paragraph, last line, an "a" should be inserted before "priest" to read - "... It looks like a priest...".
"Doing nothing with purpose!" ... Rhodes, 2012
http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15532
Carrion Crush quest in Zenithar, map coordinates 1476:615. In addition to the text error mentioned
here in the Start Quest screen, second paragraph, third line, sixth word "
scavengar" should be "
scavenger" - "...vicious
scavenger birds ...".
"Doing nothing with purpose!" ... Rhodes, 2012
http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15535
On "mouse-over" the Map icon the text displayed is "Opens up the World Map." whereas clicking it opens the Zone Map (from which it is possible to view the World Map of course).
http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15544
The Lost Dagger quest, east of Hunter Camp, Ennahar, map coordinates 1599:1186. In the Quest Complete screen, first paragraph, third line, third word "crododile" should be "crocodile" - "... meanest crocodile ever!...". Also, second paragraph, fourth line, fifth word "Ohh" should be "Ooh".
"Doing nothing with purpose!" ... Rhodes, 2012
http://nadirim.com/forum/post/15553