Forum › Bug tracking › Text Related Errors

I will admit I didn't really read a lot of the dialogue during play, but now that I am it's like it is my birthday!

"GRAMMAR NAZI POWERS GO!"

First:

It says " I think I 'so' something yesterday. Like a small blue girl. Then a giggle. And then these were on the hook. Take them. They scare me"
This has multiple mistakes. First 'so' should be 'saw' . The next part is worded awkwardly making fragments. " It looked like a small blue girl" works better than what it is currently. " Then I heard a giggle and these were on the hook." because I am not sure if he heard it or what it just says then a giggle. Finally the last two ideas can be combined "Take them because they scared me".


Second:
To make the tense of the paragraph match 'will' needs to be changed to 'would'


I believe this is a daily quest in Zenithar called Trinkets of the water.

Good points dougie, your "something in the water" edits. But it's much too long i think. Guessing that it was shortened because of that, tho the result was not entirely comprehensible. So can you think of a less wordy way to include all these ideas?
Thanks for your suggestions.

this text (something in the water one) is supposed to be a replica of speech, so except for "saw" instead of " so," it's okay as it is. Good tp pay attention to the quality of the text, though. I speak as an English teacher! BTW you are absolutely right about the other one., Dougie.

Originally Posted by Ethelinda »this text (something in the water one) is supposed to be a replica of speech, so except for "saw" instead of " so," it's okay as it is. Good tp pay attention to the quality of the text, though. I speak as an English teacher! BTW you are absolutely right about the other one., Dougie.

Oh I didn't know on the first one, but thank you Ethelinda!

Many Pages (Gather) quest in Zenithar, map coordinates 1424:652. When hovering over the NPC quest giver the name given in the info box is "Ibranin", however, in the Start Quest screen and the Quest Tracker the name given is "Paca".

there's a boy in a "three" house in "where are the children" in Magarin

A Bet of Bravery (Timed) quest in Spider Quarter, Zenithar (1533:708). In the Quest Completed screen, the third line reads "...is the thrill of the bet we will live. The outcome is ...", I suggest "...is the thrill of the bet we live for. The outcome is ..." instead.

There's a plague of missing Ns at the end of "turn" in the new skill descriptions!

Im so glad the Beginners Guide is finally seeing the light of day, but it went live with incorrect information. As mentioned yesterday, the Character Page section discusses the attribute cap as being 50%. As Zyel posted yesterday here, there is no longer a cap. The guide could also use a quick rundown of the "Diminishing Returns" concept.

Also, not quite sure how the colors of equipment got messed up, but Common is White, Elite is Green, and Epic is Pink.

And while its not technically a text error, there is still a very misleading graphic for the skill trees. If you don't want to advertise that the gem upgrades for skills cost 20 gems per skill, then maybe you should reconsider the cost.

Help Wanted quest in Ennahar Harbour (1559:1132). In the Start Quest screen, second paragraph, last line, second word "tough" should be "though" - "... I don't know where she is though..."

Also, in the Quest Objective section "priestess" should be "Priestess" - "...Priestess Zahida."

The Matron quest The Serpent Spire in Zenithar. In the Start Quest screen first paragraph, second line, fourth word "foe" should be "for" - "... defended this structure for ages! ...

Frozen Snakes quest The Serpent Spire in Zenithar. In the Start Quest screen, second paragraph, second line, "she's is" should be either "she is" or "she's".

The Clockwork Gate quest in Sunthief Gorge. In the Start Quest screen, first paragraph, first line, seventh word "an" should be "and", also the ninth word "A" should be "The" - "... huge and impenetrable. The cogs ...".

Cats or Letters quest in Zenithar. At one of the quest locations, 1441:717, there is a spelling error in the text bubble "suppossed" should be "supposed" - "Peaches? On my face ... that's supposed to make me look younger!"

It is a little confusing having two stat listings for Defense in the Kavilan's Twinblades and Fine Vanquisher's Flail info boxes.



Uploaded with ImageShack.us

" alt="" />

Agbani Mezo Arena - III should be changed to Agbanfelder-Kampfarena - III

The text in the quest has the right language. Just the title is not in German.

If you sell an item with "Better loot chance ..." in the "TRADER" dialog when you hover over the item it compares to your current item displaying the text "Better ioot chance ...".

Hello,

I shared a mistranslation (English => French) for the quest The Soup Reptiles, since the camps of hunters by Salk'Maran.

He tells us to collect the eggs of crocodiles, outside, we must fight against the crocodiles to get them.

So instead of "collecting eggs" is "Get the eggs.

This, and hope you have help. ^ ^

in all fairness, that's how I usually type "champion" too

also, the text should read "your will breaks"

I do not think this strictly speaking a Text Error, however, I do think it is misleading especially for new players - the Karasim Fighting Pit requires Level 4 and, as it looks here, 3 Fame Points but the "3" actually relates to Level of Fame i.e., 10 Fame Points are required to fight in this pit!



Uploaded with ImageShack.us

In the text bubble for this NPC near Hunter Camp, at map coordinates 1534:1189, the "is" in the third line should be removed - " ... but he knows how to ....".



Uploaded with ImageShack.us